dressed in moonlight
and the stars
bringing with you such things
wicked things
teasing things
promising things
twisted things
all the things
you wrapped around me
gently, cruelly, softly, darkly
your midnight eyes gleamed
as you wound your spell
and i
i simply
fell.
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*the line "you tumbled from the sky" was inspired by the opening line of a poem by finbar, The Cruelty Of My Heart.
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4 comments:
beautiful.. angel - powerful metaphor
@selkie:
Thank you for your lovely comment, my dear.
And what a lovely synchronicity...I was actually thinking of you today!
Hope all is well with you,
Angel :)
Angel, i just had to comment on this, first i am flattered that you would find inspiration in a line that i wrote,
secondly you did a beautiful sensual treatment of the other side, the one that had fallen.
a very haunting poem, and it just aches with sensuality, and the passion of surrender.
thank you.
finbar.
@finbar:
I find it's really cool when someone's poetry inspires me to write a poem of my own...so thanks to you my friend for inspiring me & this poem.
Angel :)
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