electricity,
you called it
the electric current
that sizzled
between us
we zapped each other’s
neurons and synapses
and every single other
pleasure center
oh yes
we connected each other’s dots
we did
over and over and over again
it was so unexpected
there was no build up
there was no slow building of fire
no
it exploded
white hot
so hot so hot so hot
the minute
you looked
into my eyes
you literally jumped
in your skin
when you looked at me
we were both that startled
and how could i know
because i did know
oh i sure knew
the electricity would jump
between us
with just one look
we didn’t just meet
we collided
white suns smashing into each other
we crashed
we thrashed
we smashed through
all the usual barriers
that just melted away
it was so raw
and crazy
and cataclysmic
and i loved every
white hot wet musky wild primal
moment of it
i consumed you
and you consumed me
and baby,
i can taste it
still
that mind numbingly addictive slick
moment
when i met you
and you met me
and we
tasted that one long moment
together
it was
electric.
***
Beautiful. =o)
ReplyDeleteAngel,
ReplyDeletethat was electrifying. felt like i had grabbed a live wire and had to just hang on until the charge drained me.
enjoyed this one alot, also loving your burst of creativity. its so nice to see you writing so much, after such a long time of sporadic posting.
i may not comment on everything all the time but i do read and lurk.
i guess that is just part of my voyeuristic tastes.
hope that you dont mind.
finbar.
@黃愛玲:
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment & for stopping by my blog. :)
You're welcome to read and comment or read and lurk any time! Fel free to sit on the comfy couch there. :)
ReplyDeleteYes I have been inspired alot lately and am happy to be writing so much poetry lately.
Ah the Poetic Muse...may she dance with us both all the time!
Happy that you got a charge out of this verse,
Angel